Tuesday, April 18, 2006

Trace

Fingertips
Pale white softness
Inner arm
Curve around
Down the ribcage
Inhale
Cupping softness

Close enough
Less than inches
Breath on lips
Don’t touch

Eyes hold
No wavering gazes
Wordless sentences
Begging but withheld
Self denial

Movement
Curve cooling with absence
Shifting up
Twirls in locks
Gentle pull
Slight moan
Silence broken

Turn on heel
Steady steps
Clicking shut
Lingering cologne

11 comments:

Scorpy said...

Damn that is so Hot...and so well written...when's the book coming out? :)

Coyote Mike said...

well, you blew the fantasy I wrote right out of the water. Wanna trade "ideas?" ;)

Anonymous said...

Amazing.

ChickyBabe said...

Beautiful! I love the lingering cologne...

Steph said...

Very nice Megs.

Anonymous said...

Pervert!

Faltenin said...

Excellent!

Jenni said...

Your words remind of times and places.
It's fascinating.

Lizzie said...

wow... that was great, Meg.

Trix said...

I shouldn't have come here...my guy is 9000 miles away.

Damnit. I definitely shouldn't have read that.

meghansdiscontent said...

Scorpy - Flatterer! :)

Coyote - LOL, thanks, but I'll keep my own ideas for now.

Anon - Danka!

Chickybabe - That's my favorite part, too! I have this odd thing with the way a man smells.

Steph - It's not your Madonna rip-off, but I do what I can!

Anon - Umm, and I was going to post Part II tomorrow . . and it's 100 times worse. Maybe I should rethink that.

Fal - Thanks, doll!

Jenni - GIRL! You should write one of your memories!!! I would LOVE to read it!

Lizzie - Thank you, chica!

Trix - Honey, I feel no pity for you. I wish I could, but I can't. He's amazing and you've got the rest of your life to make poetry like that . . . all I've got right now are my imaginings. :)